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Jirahne

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EDIT: Okay, I've edited him a bit, but ... he's not been rescanned, so you'll have to wait a while longer while I decide his fate (ink or pencil?!-) to see the slight fixes. :) JSYK, his shoulder has been slightly more defined, and I'm working on making him a little less skinny. xD His shoulder is also in the process of scooching up. *nod* Thanks for your input! :D *gleeful dance* ... but still crit if you notice something otherwise unmentioned! :o

heh, alright, so... This is heavily inspired by two artists... Who don't know I exist, but I was looking at one of their stuffs for anatomy, and I've watched both for a while now... and . Look at them and realize fully how much I suck and how much they own my soul. xD

Anyway, Saya's newest thing got me wanting to draw a Kirin-like person, and then I got the glorious fun of trying to make him not look totally like her guy... which was hard... >_>;; And Momo has been making me want to draw hooved people. And they won. And Jirahne was born.

But anyway, CRITIQUE ME! D: Not too horribly though... *squirms* I don't want to hate this guy after all the time I spent on him. ^^;

Oh, and, um, I think he's going to be a scientist. :D ... and the 'J' is like an 'h'. :P I win Kyu! XD
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ZOINK! I HAVE WIRELESS INTERNET! PWN PWN PWN!

Ahem, anyway. The only real problem I see is, yes you know it, the shoulder. Oh, and the, wait... yeah, the right hand (because I know the difference now!). But hey, your detail pwns mine with a broomstick up the butt, and not the stick end, either (oh, that would tickle, tickle HARD, in a painful 'oh dear please rip my face off now' sort of way).

But I'm sure I critiqued it at school, or did I? Can't quite remember, so oh well.


Y'know, I should really post all my new stoof, drastic improvement and all, I feel as if I may come out of my artistic hidey hole... and then chew my foot off in anxiety.

As a side note, I just spent six and a half hours at Odyssey and Ryan got, in this time span, six or seven major splinters. Just thought you should know that. Oh, and I stabbed myself with a handheld sewing machine. Thus ends my mediocre day.

No school in the morrow, by the way. Call me, I bees a lonely person.